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Sunday, January 8, 2017

देश कु सिपै -किसाण थैं

Modern Garhwali Verses  Songs,     Poems 
 देश कु सिपै -किसाण थैं  
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रचना --   बी   ऐन  शर्मा 'पथिक ' (  इंटर कॉलेज हल्दूखाल पौड़ी ,  गढ़वाल  ) 
Poetry  by - B. N. Sharma 'Pathik'-
Critical and Chronological History of Modern Garhwali (Asian) Poetry –239 
-साहित्य इतिहास , इंटरनेट प्रस्तुति और व्याख्या : भीष्म कुकरेती 
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देश कु सिपै त्वै खुणि सलाम 
माटी कु सिपै त्वै खुणि सलाम। 
एक सिंचदी थाती थै तू एक सिंचदी माटी थै 
कर्म की लकीर खींचि द्विया सिंचदी मातृ थैं 
ह्यूं प्वड्यूं हों डांडी या तप्त भूमि रेत की 
आंधी म भी जळणे रैंद मशाल यूँ तुम्हारी कर्म की 
देश कु सिपै त्वै खुणि सलाम 
माटी कु सिपै त्वै खुणि सलाम। 
दूध माँ को नी लजान्दा देश सेवा मा
चाँद तैं खैंची ल्यांदा तप्त भूमि रेत मा 
स्वाभिमान वींकु जन ह्यूं च विशाला 
आशियाना द्याखा वींकु नभ से विशाला 
देश कु सिपै त्वै खुणि सलाम 
माटी कु सिपै त्वै खुणि सलाम। 
राति  कु अन्ध्यरू द्यखद तुमारु उदंकार थै 
सुबेर कु उज्यळ द्याखद तुमारु चमत्कार थै 
मोती स्यु पसीना तुमारु खिल्दु  मातृभूमि मा 
देश कु सिपै त्वै खुणि सलाम 
माटी कु सिपै त्वै खुणि सलाम। 

सौंज्यणा स्य बांद तेरी मन ही मन मा रैन्दी च 
शिव की शक्ति बणी त्वैम प्राणशक्ति फ़ुकदी च 
कलम कु सिपै बणि की कर दूँ तुम्हारो गुण बखान 
दूध माँ को नी लजान्दा देश सेवा मा। 
 देश कु सिपै त्वै खुणि सलाम 
माटी कु सिपै त्वै खुणि सलाम। 


(Ref-उड़ घिंडुड़ी उड़ -पृष्ठ 91 )
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 पौड़ी गढ़वालउत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली कविता चमोली  गढ़वालउत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली पद्य  कविता रुद्रप्रयाग गढ़वालउत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली पद्य  कविता ;टिहरी गढ़वालउत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली पद्य  कविता ;उत्तरकाशी गढ़वालउत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली पद्य  कविता देहरादू गढ़वालउत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली पद्य  कविता 

बिचारि गौ ड़ि (गढ़वाली कविता )

Modern Garhwali Verses  Songs,     Poems 
बिचारि गौ ड़ि   (गढ़वाली कविता )
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रचना --   दीपक रावत  (  धुमाकोट , पौड़ी गढ़वाल  ) 
Poetry  by - Deepak Rawat (Dipak Rawat) -
Critical and Chronological History of Modern Garhwali (Asian) Poetry – 238
-साहित्य इतिहास , इंटरनेट प्रस्तुति और व्याख्या : भीष्म कुकरेती 
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किलै लग्यां स्यवा करणा ?
पींडु -पाणि खूब सरणा 
आज द्वी , सासु -ब्वारि 
क्य समझि  सकद ?
बिचारि गौड़ि। 
देखि सकद 
वींका बछरौ हिस्सौ दूध 
कैपर छ लगणू 
गुसैणि का नाति -नतिणा 
पीणा छन छक्वैक 
वींकि बाछि रीति पांसी चूसणी 
अधप्यट ह्वेक। 
मैहमनों की कट्वरि भ्वरीं 
गुसैण रोज धमकाणि रौड़ि    
क्य समझि  सकद ?
बिचारि गौड़ि। 
कुटुमदारी तैं दूधै गिलास 
वींतैं सूखु घास 
बाछि तैं कौदै लुटमणि 
गुसैंण का नौन्याळो तैं 
रोटि मा नौणि 
कतना स्वार्थि छ मनखि 
लैंदी त गौ माता 
नथर लमण्डण्य गौड़ि 

क्य समझि  सकद ?
बिचारि गौड़ि। 
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( उड़ घुघती उड़ , पृष्ठ -69 )
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 पौड़ी गढ़वालउत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली कविता चमोली  गढ़वालउत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली पद्य  कविता रुद्रप्रयाग गढ़वालउत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली पद्य  कविता ;टिहरी गढ़वालउत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली पद्य  कविता ;उत्तरकाशी गढ़वालउत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली पद्य  कविता देहरादू गढ़वालउत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली पद्य  कविता 

Why Harish Juyal is called Great Poet of Contemporary Satirical Poetry World?

Critical and Chronological History of Modern Garhwali (Asian) Poetry –-152
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                    Literature Historian:  Bhishma Kukreti


   Using animals as symbol for telling story or preaching lesion is an old way oldest form of expression in literature without words or with words.
  As far as animal symbols in Sanskrit classic are concerned, animals have been used in all types of literature as Mahabharata, Ramayana, Upanishads, Hitopadesh,Jataka or Panchtantra. The great poet and Dramatist Kalidas used animals as symbols in his classic literature.
 From modern satirical literature point of view ‘Animal Farm’ a great novel by Indian born British citizen (who worked in Burma and India as British officer too) George Orwell (1903-1950) is the best example of using animal as symbols for creating satire, humor and preaching too. Animal Farm is best example of symbolism and allusion in prose. As per a critic Michael J. Cummings (2003)  , there are following major themes in ‘Animal Farm’-
1-Maintaining an Ironclad on power, ruthless dictator
2-‘Power tends to corrupt and absolute power corrupts absolutely.
3- Lies can be dressed up in clothing of truth.
4- Absolute loyalty to authority invites abuse of power.  
  Chaucer used animals in his many poetic tales.  
             Great symbolic poet, Nobel laurite William B. Yeats used animals in his poetries including his attempting to turn himself into a Landor Style social ironist (Bloom Harold 1972)
 Lewis Carroll is famous for creating animals as his characters for humor creation.
 Kipling’s ‘The Jungle Book’ is the best example of r using animals for humorous literature. American president Theodor Roosevelt was fan of the novel ‘The wind in the Willows’ (1908) by Kenneth Grahame because animals as symbols of human characters and creating humor (Gale Cengage, 2003).
         Great satirical Spanish poet and novel writer   Mitchell Vazquez ( 1547-1616) also used animals for symbolic purpose .
                  C.J. Heinrich Hein (1797-1856) a German poet is famous for creating symbolic poems using animals for symbolic purposes. Another German poet Rainer Maria Rike (1875-1926) used animals as symbol in his famous poems ‘Ding-Gedischte 9Things Poems).
 French literature creators have been always doing evolution for art from borrowed from other area. The French poets used haiku for creating symbolic poems too as Jules Renald , Couchoud, Fernand  Gregh, Gilbert, jean Paulhan, Francis Jammes , Paul Claudel etc . Bertrand Agostini  mentions  Many French Haiku creators used animals as symbol for satire and humor in his brilliant article ‘The Development of French Haiku in first half of 20th century’(1998).
           In all languages and society, using animals as symbol for creating humor and satire is very common.
            A poetry critic and language professor of Mumbai University  Dr Manju Dhoundiyal after studying ‘Khigtat’ and ‘Uktat’ poetry collections by Harish Juyal mentions to this author that Harish Juyal ‘Kutz’  is one of the great satirical poets of contemporary humorous and satirical world poetry.
 The following poem is proof that remarks of Dr Manju Dhoundiyal that Harish is one of the great poets of contemporary satirical and humorous world poetry.

  स्याळ : The Cunning Fox

कवि - हरीश जुयाल 'कुटज'


डंड्वाक पाणी चरणा छन
माछा तीसन मोरणा छन I
बिरळयों कि ह्वेगे खलगड्डी
मुसा चुलखंदु क्वरणा छन I
दिन  घुघत्यों जादा रैनी
ढंगरयों गरुड़ घुरणा छन i
स्यू बाघ ह्वेगिन लुंज
स्याळयूँ ठाट चलणा I
जैनि हैंको जलड़ी उगटऐन
आज वी औंगरणा छन I

(ग्राम टसिला , पट्टी मल्ला बदलपुर )

Harish Juyal uses animals in such a way that the readers smile but feel sharp pain on the changing social and political scenario.
The literal meaning of poem is
Bear are watering (or taking water from the pond)
Thirsty, fish are dying
Cats are without skin
Rats are biting earthen stove
Gone are the days of Ghughti’s melodious warbling?  
The vultures are warbling
Brave Tigers are now, crippled
Cunning Foxes are now, leaders  
Those who are de-rooting jungles  
They are now, prosperous  
 Harish is winner in using common animal symbols and creating an image of horrible changes in the present society. The ‘Syal’ poetry speaks that changes are just opposite of what should have been for the benefiting present and excellent future.
The poem is complete and competitive enough for establishing statement of Dr. Manju Dhoundiyal that at present Harish Juyal is one of the great satirical poets of world literature.
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 Harish Juyal born in 1969, in Taseela village of Badalpur, Pauri Garhwal.

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Use of Parody in creating Classic satire by Harish Juyal

Critical and Chronological History of Modern Garhwali (Asian) Poetry –-152
                    Literature Historian:  Bhishma Kukreti

        Parody is defined as “Parody (also called spoof, take off, send –up or lampoon)  is work created for intimating,  making fun of , or commenting on original work –its subject, author, style or some of other target –by means of satiric or ironic imitation.(Wikipedia)”
 Literature Theorist Linda Hutcheon states, “Parody is important but is not always at the expense of parodied text”
Simon Dentith states, “Parody- is any cultural practice which provides a relatively polemical allusive imitation of another cultural production or practice”
   Harish Juyal is one of the prominent signatures of humorous -satirical Garhwali poetries.
 Harish Juyal did experiments in creating humorous -satirical Garhwali poetries. One of his tools for creating humor and satire in poetries is creating parodies.
Vladimir Nabokov states that satire is lesion and parody is game. Harish Juyal understands the intension of Vladimir very well   as other satirists understand.
  In the following stanza Harish creates parody of a classic Sanskrit Shloka defining the five important characteristics of a student. Harish just tilts the characteristics and satirizes the today’s students.
मैच चेष्टा , ब्वगठ्या  ध्यानम सुंगर निद्रा तथैव 
डिग्री  हारी,  किताब त्यागी , विद्यार्थी पंच  लक्षणम
Five characters of Promising Student -Cricket Match Gesticulating  
Lamb Meat Focusing, Pig like Sleeping, Degree Stealing, Book Hating  

Bruce Campbell writes that parody is another form of comedy and it applies the following paradoxical poem by Harish-
    पुजै निमंत्रण

  
भेज रहे हैं पुजै निमंत्रण प्रियवर तुम्हें बुलाने को। 
हे ब्वगठ्या के प्रेमी तुम भूल  जाना खाने को।।
  The Mantras in Garhwal are famous and most of Garhwalis know the first lines of Mantras. Harish created a couple of Garhwali poetries imitating Garhwali Mantras. His aim was not just imitate the mantra style but by taking cue from mantra, he lambastes on alcohol drinking -
माता ब्रांडी ,पिता ओल्डमौंक  


ओम नमो गुरु को आदेशा 
माता ब्रांडी ,पिता ओल्डमौंक  
तीन लोक तारिणी  , थ्री ऐक्स डागिणी , लाल नागिणी  
चेतक बियर को आदेशा 
व्हिस्की पीर को आदेशा 
टिंचरी जोगिणी कु जुहार 
ठर्रा जोगी कू नमस्कार 


Parody and satire are more than mere comic convictions (B.E. Bonstetter) Harish took Sanskrit Shlokas as challenge for parodying the Shlokas for making satire as follows. Harish uses parody as a medium for social criticism -

विश्वेश्वराय  'सुरा' पिये , प्याज की दाणी  घुट्टी लगे
भेळउन्द प्वडाय मुंड कच्याय , कुकरोन तैकू थ्वबड़ो चटाय


जुयाल स्रोत्रम

              भ्रात्री स्नेह पदेसिका
ख़ास भायुं मा खुंकर्यूळ ह्वाओ  एका कारिज मा हैंकु नि आयो
इका उन्नति मा हैंकु जळन्ति  नुष्य रुपेण ढयबराश्चरंती


  Harish takes wrong happening left and right though following parody (a Shloka)

                   हरिओम् तत्सत्

जुमळी दिदा ब्वाद हरिओम तत्सत , सम्सूत रातिम ब्वादा सरांद
भैर कनु रौंद नमो शिवाय: ,भितरम जैक भुटुवा खुज्यांद
    पुजै निमंत्रण

  
भेज रहे हैं पुजै निमंत्रण प्रियवर तुम्हें बुलाने को। 
हे ब्वगठ्या के प्रेमी तुम भूल  जाना खाने को।।
 For Harish the style is just a medium and he uses Parody the best medium. Harish is master of words and is successful in creating humorous satire by Parody.

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