Symbols, Images and figures of speech in poems by Dinesh Dhyani

Critical and Chronological History of Modern Garhwali (Asian) Poetry – 137

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                    Literature Historian:  Bhishma Kukreti

 Dinesh Dhyani is one of important poets of Garhwali poetry world of twenty first century. He uses symbols and figures of speech for creating perfect images.

A few symbols and images are as under in his poems 

प्रतीक /बिम्ब

नया पिज्जा, बिसलेरी

बाटा-घाटा, पुगडि-सारि ,पटासुलकणि

आम , सब शून्य ,ताळ अर बेताळ

वोट बैंक

पणसरू, मति म्वार, थैला से बिड्या

सल्लि, राजनीति मा टल्ली

बोलि गूंगी

उजास ,लाटी

झिपलण्य बाटु, गळया

दीप-धूप दिखौं

अजी क्य ब्वन्न, घस कटै

जण्या-मन्या मनखि

हुयीं पजीं मौ

. कविता बौळे गे, छन्द खौळेगैंन

नै कौथिग

कीडू कि ब्वै , पण नागरजा को पुजरू चांठौं का घ्वीड मंगतू

मुट्ट बोटि , विकासौ सूरज

हमरू बांठौ उज्यळु , अखळया-चखळयौं

नैणिताल बि ब्योलि बणीं

नेता भी प्रवासी ह्वैगिन

लाटी बाटा-घाटौं

तौं खुणि पोडिगे रात

मनख्यात कु छौ जोर

खिल्दा फूल हैंसदा पात

सैसरा बेटी मैतूडा जाणीं

दुध बोलि , अलख ज्गौला

अपणु लद्वडिकु नि सुणदु

मौ मिटौण

गुसैं बिगरि छन गोर

मौ-मिटौण , ग्वीलु-गुठ्यार बुज्या उड्यार

बग्दा मनखि रीता कूडा

कांठ मा कु

सूरज थैं

ढसाग

मौ मवासु, भै-भयात

अपणां घर भ्वरणा

लम्पसार

गणमण-गुणमण

जून सि मुखडि, अलमस्त हिरणी

खुद बिसराणु

पंछि तिसळा, गदन्यों छाल

सरकरि ध्याडी

धुरपळम दुबलु जामी

सौटकट

बीच धार मा

आन-बान अर शान

कटगडु होंदु

पुरख्यौं की धीत

मुखड़ी को मुलमुलाट

हासिल सच जीरो

Dinesh uses figures of speech marvelously in his poems 

अलंकार

आम

दिल्ली जनु , किदोला सि मडकेणां

चण्ट,चकडैत

राजनीति मा टल्ली

बोलि गूंगी

चटगताळ

नै नौ दिन अर पुरण सौ दिन।

अनाड़ि हत्थों

घस कटै

छाल पर बिटे तमसु देखि ल्या

गढभारती (संस्था और गढवाली भाषा  स्वयम में )

रूखि ढंय्यां

पे्रम प्यार पूजा होंद

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Ganga Ji ka Jau Chhan Bhaiji: Poetries of Pain of a Migrated Garhwali for never returning his Motherland

(Review of Garhwali Poetry Collection ‘Ganga Ji ka Jau Chhan Bhaiji) 

Critical and Chronological History of Modern Garhwali (Asian) Poetry – 137

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                    Literature Historian:  Bhishma Kukreti

          The poems in poetry collection ‘Ganga Ji ka Jau Chhan Bhaiji’ by Dinesh Dhyani are nothing but sever pain of a migrated Garhwali that knows that he will never return back his motherland. The poetry collection is crying alone by a migrated Garhwali poet. 

             Dinesh Dhyani is multitalented Garhwali language creative settled in Delhi. 

           There are 63 poems in the present first poetry collection by Dinesh Dhyani. No doubt there are different subjects as spirituality, philosophy, rituals, relationship breaking pain, emotions, contemporary society, and social changes; false development, poverty;  looting by politicians, administrative class and middle men in this  poetry collection. However, most of poems ultimately show the pain of a migrated Garhwali for a situation that is not in his control that he will never be able for resettling in Garhwal. 

                Dinesh shows that the life in Garhwal is simple and stresses less but we only spoiled the life (Gaun ka hal).

कै विकास क बान स्वाच

कूण –कूणों छां लुक्यांहम ?

जन्म भूमि ख्न्द्वार कैकी

कै विकास कि पौ धना छां हम

  Migrated Dinesh Dhyani repeatedly remembers his village in many poems and shows his concern for wrong happenings in Garhwal as in ‘jandari’ poem. 

पैलि बिनसरि म

घर गौं म

घघरांदि छै जंदरि

 Dinesh Dhyani shows his pain in Garhwali ku Batu

भैजि बल

गढवाळ कु बाटू

 कनै गैं ह्वालु ?

  There are satires with rage in various poems and at the same time there is helplessness too –

अब क्य कन

हमुन अपणी खैरि

कैम ब्वन ?

         The poems are of modern style, less of rhyme in nature. Famous poet Prem Lal Bhatt remarks that the poems of Dinesh Dhyani are nearer to intellectualism. This author calls such poets as poets of Bahgunavadi. 

  Dinesh Dhyani used tens of symbols (new and old) for creating desired images as खुंच्या, हिटै, कुटै, चुंगा, भयों क बांटा , चौनकोट्या बांद and many more .

 Dinesh uses as per need the proverbs and saying marvelously. Dinesh uses standard Garhwali but there are dialects of Nainidanda .  

 The poems are enjoyable and readers definitely will wait his next poetry collection.

 ‘Ganga Ji ka Jau Chhan Bhaiji’ a Garhwali poetry collection

Poems by: Dinesh Dhyani 

Year of publication 2011

Next Era Print and Publication

S 553/554 B-8

Gautam Complex, School Block 

Shakrpur 

Delhi 110092

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Dinesh Dhayni: A Poet of Intellectual Poetries

Critical and Chronological History of Modern Garhwali (Asian) Poetry – 137

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                    Literature Historian:  Bhishma Kukreti

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           Dinesh Dhyani is multitalented Garhwali literature creative and social activist. Dinesh Dhyani was born on 8^thAugust 1966 in Parkhandai village, Nainidanda block of Pauri Garhwal. 

  Dinesh Dhyani has been publishing stories, poems and articles in Garhwali from 1988. Dinesh Dhyani published a Garhwali short story collection and poetry collection Ganga Ji Ka Jau chhan Bhaiji. 

  Dinesh deals with varied subjects and tones. Prem Lal Bhatt put his poetries under intellectual Garhwali poems - Bahgunavadi poet. 

 Dinesh Dhyani shows anguish in worsening situation in Garhwal. As a migrated Garhwali, his pain is always for not returning to his motherland. His verses are melodious but are mostly free verse. Critics appreciated his uses of figures of speech, symbols, images.

        Another pottery collection by Dinesh Dhyani is under publication. His Garhwali is standard Garhwali with little bit Nainidanda region. 

A post graduate in Hindi also published Hindi poetry collection and a novelette. 

-    गरीबी उन्मूलन (गढ़वाली कविता )

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 गरीबी उन्मूलन का वास्ता 

हॉल मा सेमीनार हूणु छौ 

सब्बि खै पेकि चलिगे छया 

रयां छा त वै हॉल का इर्द गिर्द 

झुग्गियों मा रैण वळा 

अर ऊंका नौन्याळ 

जु खाली बिसलरी बोतळो थैं 

सिगरेट क टुकड़ों 

पन्नी अर कूणा फर 

अध खयां पिज्जा -बर्गर 

थैं समेटी -समेटी 

वों फरै धूळ हटै -हटै 

खाणा छया अर 

खुश हूणा छया।   

चला भैजी गौं जौला

चला भैजी गौं जौला

घर-गौं कि सार खबर ल्यौंला। चला...

गौं का बाटा-घाटा, पुगडि-सारि 

कूड़ि-छनुडि कि खुद बिसरौला। चला...

उदास डंड्यळि, निसस्यौं चैक

यकुलंसि वब्बरि लीपि-घूसि कि औंला। चला...

मकडजळौंन घिर्यों रस्वडु

बंद तिबारि का द्वार खोलि कि औंला । चला...

पाणीं पदंेरा, बद्वाण भेंटी औला

द्यबतौं का ठौ म शीश झुकौंला। चला...

उजड्यां पैरौं, मिलिजुलि क धरांैला

बांजि पुगड्यौं खैंदि कैरि कि औंला। चला...

ग्यौं-जौ कि फसल बूतिकि औंला

घास जम्यां सेरौं हौळ लगौकि औंला

ग्यौं-जौ कि फसल बूतिकि औंला। चला...

बाळि सगोड्यों हैरि-भैरि कैरि औला

मुंगरि, कखड़ि, ग्वदडि, आरू खौंला। चला...

बसगाळ गौठम घास धनौं जौला

सिलडपाख ग्वरूम जैकि बसुळि बजौला। चला...

बिरड्या खौळा मेळौं कि थाति बौडौला

मौ कि मकरेणि नयेणौ अप्वळा कौथिगि जौला। चला...

फागुणा मैना होरि ख्यलणां गौं-गौ जौला

चन्दा, मिटौण कैरि कि क्वी इस्गोल बणौला। चला...

बैशाखा मैना भौन कु कौथिग जौंला

चाणा, कंुजा, गट्टा, पुयांबाज, अर जलेबी ल्यौंला। चला...

चर्खि म बैठिकि काळा चश्मा पैरला

पटासुलकणि मरला 

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क्य कुमौ क्य गढ़वाळ (गढ़वाली कविता )

क्य कुमौ क्य गढ़वाळ   (गढ़वाली कविता )

रचना --   साधो सिंह नेगी 

Poetry  by - Sadho Singh Negi -

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-साहित्य इतिहास , इंटरनेट प्रस्तुति और व्याख्या : भीष्म कुकरेती 

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रौड़िगे मेरु पहाड़ 

क्य कुमौ क्य गढ़वाळ 

जैकु बोलि कि ,टेक लगांदी 

वैन पैलि मारि दे फाळ ,

खाणि की पटाळ छै ज्वा 

धूरी मा पुजेन्दी छै ज्वा ,

पहाडै आस छै ज्वा  ,

दानि आंख्यूं कि  ..  . भ्वाळ छै ज्वा। 

डाँड्यूं बटी  रौड़ि दौड़ि 

बणिगै गाडै गंगलोड़ि 

पौंछिकी देवाळु  मा ,

कणाणी च खुट्टी तौळ        

क्य कुमौ क्य गढ़वाळ 

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 पौड़ी गढ़वाल, उत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली , कविता ; चमोली  गढ़वाल, उत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली पद्य  , कविता ; रुद्रप्रयाग गढ़वाल, उत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली पद्य  , कविता ;टिहरी गढ़वाल, उत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली पद्य  , कविता ;उत्तरकाशी गढ़वाल, उत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली पद्य  , कविता ; देहरादून गढ़वाल, उत्तराखंड  से गढ़वाली पद्य  , कविता ;