Bhap Ingine: A Modern Garhwali Story with New Storytelling Technique

(Critical and Historical review of Modern Garhwali Stories and Storytelling Techniques)

 

                                          Let Us Celebrate Hundredth Year of Modern Garhwali   Stories!

                                                                 Bhishma Kukreti

[Notes on storytelling techniques in modern stories; storytelling techniques in modern Garhwali stories; storytelling techniques in modern Uttarakhandi stories; storytelling techniques in modern Mid Himalayan language stories; storytelling techniques in modern Himalayan stories; storytelling techniques in modern North Indian  stories; storytelling techniques in modern Indian stories; storytelling techniques in modern Indian subcontinent  stories; storytelling techniques in modern South Asian  stories; storytelling techniques in modern Asian regional language stories]

           Storytelling concept started with human civilization. The cavemen used storytelling technique. In modern Garhwali story world, Sada Nand Kukreti came with agile way of storytelling technique in satirical and humorous style the first modern Garhwali story ‘Garhwali That (1913). From that time modern Garhwali storytellers used different storytelling techniques.  The modern Garhwali literature storytellers after Sada Nand understood that there should be hidden or explicit authenticity in storytelling technique. Modern Garhwali Literature storytellers have been aware that in storytelling technique they should connect the views to the readers. Modern Garhwali storytellers are well versed that storytelling technique is connecting the knower with known to. Modern Garhwali Literature storytellers are alert that storytelling technique is not speech delivery but engaging readers. In various eras, modern Garhwali literature storytellers develop storytelling technique and style with the time. There obvious examples that modern Garhwali literature storytellers are well versed that storytelling style in written form  is different than oral storytelling technique and written storytelling technique has different rules and forms than oral  storytelling techniques. The modern Garhwali story literature is also mirror of energy, spirit, force of storytellers.

     In each era, modern Garhwali storytellers were always busy in developing newer storytelling technique. Famous Hindi poet Vijay Gaur wrote a story ‘Bhap Injin’ (Chitthi 21^st issue).  The story is about a boy gets in a rail compartment and he woke up in Dehradun. In between he encounters with various emotions unknown to him.  Vijay did not use Garhwali phrases as required but the story ‘Bhap Injin’ is always appreciated by critics as Dr. Anil Dabral, Madan Duklan for its different storytelling technique than contemporary storytelling techniques in modern Garhwali story literature.

   Dr Anil Dabral appreciated the efforts of Vijay Gaur for newer storytelling technique in modern Garhwali story.

Reference-

1-Abodh Bandhu Bahuguna, Gad Myateki Ganga (Part- Review for modern Garhwali storytelling techniques)

2-Dr Anil Dabral, 2007 Garhwali Gady Parampara (Part- Review for modern Garhwali storytelling techniques)

3-Bhagwati Prasad Nautiyal, articles on Durga Prasad Ghildiyal l in Chitthi Patri (Part- Review for modern Garhwali storytelling techniques)

4-Dr. Nand Kishor Dhoundiyal, Garhwal Ki Divangat Vibhutiyan (Part- Review for modern Garhwali storytelling techniques)

5-Notes of Prem Lal Bhatt on the Stories of Durga Prasad Ghildiyal (Part- Review for modern Garhwali storytelling techniques)

6- Gaytri Bwe, 1985 Gadh Bharati Sanstha, Delhi, (Part- Review for modern Garhwali storytelling techniques)

7- Bhishma Kukreti, 2012 Garhwali Katha Sansar, Sankalp, Delhi (Part- Review for modern Garhwali storytelling techniques)

8- Bhishma Kukreti, 2012 Kathaon ki Katha, Worldwide mini short Story writers review Series in Shailvani weekly, Kotdwara, Garhwal and Review for modern Garhwali storytelling techniques

9- Stories of ‘Katha Kumud’, Garhwali Prakashan, janankpuri, Delhi (Part- Review for modern Garhwali storytelling techniques)

10-Mini short stories by Chinmay Sayar in Shailvani, Hilans Kotdwara for knowing about storytelling techniques in modern Garhwali stories

11-Mini short stories by Puran Pant Pathik for knowing about storytelling techniques in modern Garhwali stories

12- Mini short Stories by Bhishma Kukreti in internet medium for knowing about storytelling techniques in modern Garhwali stories

13- Minis and Short stories by Dr. Narendra Gauniyal on Internet medium for knowing about storytelling techniques in modern Garhwali stories

14-21^st issue of Chitthi magazine, Dehradun for knowing about storytelling techniques in modern Garhwali stories

  

Copyright@ Bhishma Kukreti, 2/9/2012

 Notes on storytelling techniques in modern stories; storytelling techniques in modern Garhwali stories; storytelling techniques in modern Uttarakhandi stories; storytelling techniques in modern Mid Himalayan language stories; storytelling techniques in modern Himalayan stories; storytelling techniques in modern North Indian  stories; storytelling techniques in modern Indian stories; storytelling techniques in modern Indian subcontinent  stories; storytelling techniques in modern South Asian  stories; storytelling techniques in modern Asian regional language stories to be continued..  

Let Us Celebrate Hundredth Year of Modern Garhwali   Stories!

नेताण ब्वारी

(आज का दूषित राजनैतिक माहौल मा रूप्या की भूख अर भ्रष्टाचार पर एक व्यंग्य कथा)   

                    कथाकार-डॉ नरेन्द्र गौनियाल 

घसकटा ब्वारी नेता बणि गे.कमै धमै  खूब. क्य कन ईं कमै कु.घर की लाज का समणि रुपयों कु क्य मोल ? पण जमानो ख़राब.रुपयों का बाना आज लोग कुछ बि करणो तैयार ह्वै जन्दिन.रुपयों की भूख मन्खी तै कुछ बि करणो मजबूर करि दींद.साधारण सि पढीं लिखीं ब्वारी.मुश्किल से बार पास.द्वी दा बीए कु प्राईवेट फौरम बि भरि,फेल ह्वैगे.गौं मा घास-पात,गोठ-गुठ्यार,खेती-पाती,खाणि-पीणी बणाणि,लारा-लत्ता धोणा मा ही लगीं रैंदी छै.वाँ से जादा न त वींकी अकल छै ,न वींकी शकल.

            पंचैत चुनौ मा महिला रिजर्वेसन सीट से चुनौ लड़ी अर भाग से जीति की बीडीसी मेम्बर बणिगे.अब मीटिंग मा जाणु शुरू ह्वैगे.कांधी मा एक किरमिच कु बैग,आंख्युं मा काजल,होंठों मा लिपस्टिक अर प्लास्टिक का सैडल चटगैकी वा हर्बी चबोड़ मा ऐगे.बीडीसी  का बजट मा खूब सपोड़ा-सपोड़ कैरि.वींकु अपणो आदिम बि भौत चालू अर रूप्या कु मैती.जंक-जोड़ मा माहिर.  ऊ बि तीन दा दस अर द्वी दा बारा मा फेल ह्वै छौ.प्राईवेट इम्तहान मा नक़ल मारि की मुश्किल से पास ह्वै. वैका बुबन रूप्या देकी वैकि नौकरी बि लगै दे.नौकरी का दगड़ी ब्वारी का कांधी मा नेतागिरी बि शुरू ह्वैगे.ब्वारी का फर्जी दस्खत करि की वैन कतगे भला-बुरा काम शुरू करि दीं.रूप्या कमाणो वास्त ऊ कुछ बि करणो,करवाणो तैयार.महिला आरक्षण कु गैरफ़ायदा यु बदमाश उठाणा छन. 

         एक दिन बल कुछ लोगोँन ब्वारी तै कैका दगड़ वैका कमरा मा कुछ गलत हालत मा देखि दे..द्वी-चार दिन तक लोगोँ मा खुसुर-पुसुर ह्वै. हर्बी लोग बिसरि गीं.पण वैका बाद ब्वारी तै लाखों को काम मिलि गे.कखि मा रस्ता,खडंजा,सी सी मार्ग,पाणि कि टंकी,पंचैत घर,नहर,कूल हौरि बि कतगै काम.लपोड़ा-लपोड़ कैरि लाखों रूप्या कमै दीं.हैंका दा जिला का पंचैती चुनौ मा बि जीती गे.खूब दारू की चखळ-पखळ करि दे.इनु बि सुणे कि एक दारू माफियान तब ब्वारी तै जीताणो बान कतगे पेटी दारू अर लाखों रुपयों कु इंतजाम बि करे. ऊ खुद बि चुनौ लडणू छौ अर वैकि नजर बड़ी कुर्सी पर छै.लोगोँ मा छवीं त इनी बि लगी कि ब्वारी वैका दगड़ गोवा घूमणो बि गै.

           अब त ब्वारी नेताण बणिगे.वींकु आदिम अर वा छक्वे रूप्या खैकी लोगोँ का काम करणा छन.ब्वारी का भ्वार खूब नेतागिरी चलनीं च.कमीशन ले दे कि खूब काम हूणा छन.रुपयों कि छका छोळ.गाडी,बंगला,बैंक बैलेंस,सब चकाचक.काशीपुर,दिल्ली,देरादूण मा प्लौट,फ़्लैट.पौबारा हुयाँ छन.कतगै बड़ा लोगोँ,नेताओं,ठेकेदारों से अपण्यास च.नेता बणि कि भौत कुछ पै यालि,पण निरबै ब्वारी तिन भौत कुछ ख्वै यालि.               
           
          डॉ नरेन्द्र गौनियाल..सर्वाधिकार सुरक्षित..narendragauniyal@gmail.com

Critical review of Garhwali Satirical prose by Parashar Gaur -9

Critical Review of Garhwali Satirical prose – 23

                      Bhishma Kukreti

       Parashar has been publishing his Garhwali satirical prose for many years on Internet. The visitors and readers have been posting critical reactions on his Garhwali satirical prose positively.

                 Ek Auri Andolan: a Garhwali satirical prose by Satirist Parashar Gaur –

               The people started m another movement in Uttarakhand. Satirically, Parashar criticized the political readers those are not supporting Gairsain as capital of Uttarakhand.

References-

1-Abodh Bandhu Bahuguna, Garhwali Sahity ma Hasy Vyngy, Kaunli Kiran, Jankapuri, Delhi (Pl. refer part for scorning factors in Satire in Garhwali Literature)

2-Dr Anil Dabral, 2007, Garhwali Gady Parampara (Pl. refer part - Critical Review of Garhwali Satire)

3- Dhad, Garh Aina, Paraj publications. (Pl read to know Critical Review of Garhwali Satire and Uttarakhandi satire)

4- Merpahad .com and e-Uttarakhand Patrika (Pl read to know about Critical Review of Garhwali Satire and Uttarakhandi satire)

5- Ghati ke Garjate Swar , Dehradun (Pl read to know about Critical Review of Garhwali Satire and Uttarakhandi satire)

6- Bhishma Kukreti, 2012, Merapahad etc, Harish Juyal k Garhwali Vyngy (Critical Review of Garhwali Satire and Uttarakhandi satire)

7- Bhishma Kukreti, 2012 Puran pant Pathik k vyngy (Critical Review of Garhwali Satire and Uttarakhandi satire)

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Dhuna: A Garhwali Mini short Story about Pain of Woman

(Critical Review of Modern Garhwali Short Stories)

Let Us Celebrate Hundredth Year of Modern Garhwali   Stories!

                                                Bhishma Kukreti

[Notes on pain of women in mini story; pain of women in Garhwali mini story; pain of women in Uttarakhandi mini story; pain of women in Mid Himalayan mini story; pain of women in Himalayan mini story; pain of women in North Indian mini story; pain of women in Indian mini story; pain of women in SAARC Countries mini story; pain of women in South Asian mini story; pain of women in Asian mini story]

            Chinmay Sayar ( Surendra Singh Khushal , Rikhnikhal) is profilic Garhwali poet and he contributed in mini fiction area too.

  Dhuna (Chitthi 21^st issue) is about the ambition, grace, love for other, softness, affection for children of a woman. When husk got fire her all ambitions got burnt in burning husk. Anil Dabral appreciated that the depiction style and dialogues are effective in this mini short story.  

Reference-

1-Abodh Bandhu Bahuguna, Gad Myateki Ganga (Part- Review of Garhwali mini short Story)

2-Dr Anil Dabral, 2007 Garhwali Gady Parampara (Part- Review of Garhwali mini short Story)

3-Bhagwati Prasad Nautiyal, articles on Durga Prasad Ghildiyal l in Chitthi Patri (Part- Review of Garhwali mini short Story)

4-Dr. Nand Kishor Dhoundiyal, Garhwal Ki Divangat Vibhutiyan (Part- Review of Garhwali mini short Story)

5-Notes of Prem Lal Bhatt on the Stories of Durga Prasad Ghildiyal (Part- Review of Garhwali short Story and mini short Story writers)

6- Gaytri Bwe, 1985 Gadh Bharati Sanstha, Delhi, (Garhwali short Story Collection)

7- Bhishma Kukreti, 2012 Garhwali Katha Sansar, Sankalp, Delhi (Historical review of Garhwali mini short Story Writers)

8- Bhishma Kukreti, 2012 Kathaon ki Katha, Worldwide mini short Story writers review Series in Shailvani weekly, Kotdwara, Garhwal

9- Stories of ‘Katha Kumud’, Garhwali Prakashan, janankpuri, Delhi (for mini short stories in Garhwali)

10-Mini short stories by Chinmay Sayar in Shailvani, Hilans Kotdwara

11-Mini short stories by Puran Pant Pathik

12- Mini short Stories by Bhishma Kukreti in internet medium

13- Minis and Short stories by Dr. Narendra Gauniyal on Internet medium

Copyright@ Bhishma Kukreti, 1/9/2012

  Notes on pain of women in mini story; pain of women in Garhwali mini story; pain of women in Uttarakhandi mini story; pain of women in Mid Himalayan mini story; pain of women in Himalayan mini story; pain of women in North Indian mini story; pain of women in Indian mini story; pain of women in SAARC Countries mini story; pain of women in South Asian mini story; pain of women in Asian mini story to be continued…  

Let Us Celebrate Hundredth Year of Modern Garhwali   Stories!

Contribution of ‘Hilans’ for Kumauni-Garhwali Literature promotion-6)

Let Us Remember Arjun Singh Gusain for his contribution in Kumauni-Garhwali Literature promotion

                         Bhishma Kukreti

                                Hilans April 1980 Issue

Kranti- A Garhwali poem by Netra Singh Aswal suggests to movement activists to be aware about selfish politicians.

Aji Aigain vo- a Satirical Garhwali poem by Puran Pant Pathik attacks on the politician those provide hollow promises at the time of election.

                        Hilans May l 1980 Issue

Kavita -Kavita is very remarkable Garhwali poetry by Netra Singh Aswal that depicts his desire a prosperous and strong Garhwal.

                                      Hilans June l 1980 Issue

Atmkatha- Atmkatha is aGarhwali poem by Prem Lal Bhatt that talks about sellable literature creative

                                         Hilans July 1980 Issue

Din Manai Buti – a Kumauni poem by Kailash Upreti depicts about geographical nature and living style of hills of Kumaun.

Tum bta- a Garhwali poem by Dr Mahaveer Prasad Gairola is about need of freedom for youth to develop.

Copyright@ Bhishma Kukreti 31/8/2012

Let Us Remember Arjun Singh Gusain for his contribution in Kumauni-Garhwali Literature promotion

पकड़ पकड़ पकड़ ले गुंठा

दिदा !
तिन हमतै 
भौत ठगै याळी 
द्यून्लू  त मि द्यून्लू 
क्वी हैंकु नि दे सकदु 
जु बि कन 
मिन कन 
इनु बोलि कै तिन 
हम तै भौत लले यालि 
पैलिदा कौथिग मा हमन 
झुमैलो 
तेरा ही दगड़ ल़गै 
पण अबरी दा
सोचि-समझी 
लगौंला गीत 
तू बींगी गे होलू 
हमरि धीत 
समझी ले 
हमारो मन 
निथर हैंकिदा 
हमन बि 
इनी कन 
पकड़ पकड़ पकड़ ले गुंठा..    

     डॉ नरेन्द्र गौनियाल सर्वाधिकार सुरक्षित ..narendragauniyal@gmail.com

Review of Scorning factors in Garhwali Satire – 22

 (Analysis Scorning factors Aspects in Garhwali Satire created by Bhishma Kukreti-16)

                      Bhishma Kukreti

  [Notes on scorning factors in satire; scorning factors in Garhwali satire; scorning factors in Uttarakhandi language satire; scorning factors in Mid Himalayan language satire; scorning factors in Himalayan language satire; scorning factors in North Indian language satire; scorning factors in Indian language satire; scorning factors in SAARC Countries language satire; scorning factors in South Asian language satire; scorning factors in Asian language satire]

   Bhishma Kukreti m published hundreds of Garhwali satire and many are of scorning nature.  

Jamvant Ghote ar Uttarakhand andolan (Garh Aina 22/4/1989) – Jamavant Ghote was a separate Vidarbha state activist. His words were ‘You give me blood I shall give you separate Vidarbha state” However he deceived the cause after winning the election. Kukreti scorns such deceiving people and cautions Uttarakhand movement activists of Uttarakhand to recognize them.

Badlyaandu Mausam (Garh Aina 31/5/1989) Kukreti scorns the politicians and no development works in villages by government in this satirical essay.  The village uncle comes to know that certainly the elections are due because there are signs of election.

त ब्य्टा मी तै लगणु च कि द्वी चार मैना मा चुनाव होण वाळ छन  . अच्काल गाँ मा 'सत्यपथ' अरकर्म भूमि अखबार बि आण बिसे गेन. ...

मौसम बदल्याणु  च, मतबल लोन बंटी जाला . त तीन चार मैना तलक मन्योडर भेजणै  जरुरात नी च, अच्काल आश्वासन  खौंला द्वी चार मैना मा लोन खौंला 

Dungarpur ar Garhwal (Garh Aina 12/6/1989)-  Dungarpur is a poverty driven district of Rajasthan , Kukreti evaluates  Dugarpur with  Garhwal that the teen agers don’t get opportunities for s getting education and the youth from both the area are forced to take Hotel and other maid servant jobs. Kukreti scorn Uttar Pradesh government for the worsening situation in Garhwal.

डूंगरपुर मा बि कुछ गाळि भौत खराब माने जान्दन .जन कि कै कज्याणि क हैंकि कज्याणिक दगडपाणि क लन्गत्यार मा ठसका ठसकी ह्व़े जाओ त कज्याणि  गाळि  दीन्दी , ' हे परमेश्वर ! जातयार naunu  डूंगरपुर जोग रैन " बथाओ याँ से बडी  गाळि डूंगरपुर मा क्या ह्व़े सकदी ?  जुराजकुमार देसाटन (पालयन )  नि कारल त मन्योडर  कु भ्याजल ? " 

References-

1-Abodh Bandhu Bahuguna, Garhwali Sahity ma Hasy Vyngy, Kaunli Kiran, Jankapuri, Delhi (Pl. refer part for scorning factors in Satire in Garhwali Literature)

2-Dr Anil Dabral, 2007, Garhwali Gady Parampara (Pl. refer part scorning factors in Satire in Garhwali Literature)

3- Dhad, Garh Aina, Paraj publications. (Pl read to know about scorning factors in Garhwali Satire)

4- Merpahad .com and e-Uttarakhand Patrika (Pl read to know about scorning factors inGarhwali Satire)

5- Ghati ke Garjate Swar , Dehradun (Pl read to know about scorning factors in Garhwali Satire)

6- Bhishma Kukreti, 2012, Merapahad etc, Harish Juyal k Garhwali Vyngy (scorning factors in Garhwali satire by Harish Juyal

7- Bhishma Kukreti, 2012 Puran pant Pathik k vyngy (scorning factors in Garhwali Satire by Puran pant Pathik)

Copyright@ Bhishma Kukreti, 31/8/2012

Notes on scorning factors in satire; scorning factors in Garhwali satire; scorning factors in Uttarakhandi language satire; scorning factors in Mid Himalayan language satire; scorning factors in Himalayan language satire; scorning factors in North Indian language satire; scorning factors in Indian language satire; scorning factors in SAARC Countries language satire; scorning factors in South Asian language satire; scorning factors in Asian language satire to be continued …