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Monday, June 20, 2011

Humour in Garhwali Folk Poems/Songs

Humor in Folk Poems and songs , Folk Literature

Humor in Asian Folk Songs , Folk Poems and Folk Literature

Humour in Garhwali Folk Poems/Songs

(Garhwali Folk Literature, Himalayan Folk Literature, Asian Folk Literature )

Bhishma Kukreti

The history of Garhwal (India) goes beyond Vedic and Khas era . Hence, the culture and its folk literature is very rich in terms of content and genres. The Garhwali folk literature is also rich in humour, wit, irony and laughter with sexual symbolic words. There are tens of Humorous Folk Songs in Garhwali language

Before, it is discussed the humour in Garhwali folk songs/poems, the review of folk songs/literature of other regions is advisable .

Humor in Russian Folk Songs

In Russia , there are various types of humor in Chatushka traditional folk poems . Even the people create folk poems in communist regime and they were never published till the strict regime was no more, Chatushka in Rusian means “ To Speak Rapidly” Chatushka poem is a folk poem which makes use of simple rhyming scheme for conveying humorous or ironic subjects or contents

Usually, the poems are put together for creating long song Balaaika /accordion supplement. Around 1900 Ad the young communist created folk poems in this form for anti religion and against Stallion too as

When Kirov was killed,
They allowed free trade in bread.
When Stalin is killed,
They will disband all the collective farms

Many Chastushka poems are vulgar as thr following poem:

Here we have a chicken farm,

The hens keep busy hour by hour,

But the only eggs’ the farmhand sees

Are between his legs in the shower

(Egg is aSlang word as Americans use “balls”, “Nuts”

Humour in Japanese Folk Literature

In Japanese Folk litere , there are hundreds of folk poems specially in Manyosha styled poems

In Japanese folk culture, Doditsu is a folk poem format . There are various humorous poems in Doditsu style.

The Chinese folk literature is also sound as far as Humor is concerned .’Huaji’ is equivalent word in Chinese for English word comic and Chinese word Youmo is equivalent to Humor of English . Michelle c Sun provides the reference of ‘The Book of Songs” and stresses that humor and satire were integral part of old Chinese society and folk literature as well.

Michele provides an example of humor here: a translation of old Chinese folk poems

The lady: The cock has crowed

The sun has risen.

The Lover: It is not yet cockcrow--

Only the buzzing of the bluebottles.

The Lady: The east is alight.

The sun is aflame.

The Lover: it is not the dawn--

Only the moon rising.

The Lady: The bluebottles must be drowsy.

It is sweet to lie by your side.

The Lover: Quick! Let me go from you.

Do not let me hate you.

Many humorous songs in China were systematically created as Feng and Ya. Good humour was an Indentity of Chinese culture from the beginning. We may find humrous poems in the litertaure of Liu Xie (465-522 AD)

Su Dungpo ( 1036-1100) created a poem full of anecdotes and fun as

On the clear moon's speckles, silvery night!

When filling thy cup, be sure to fill it quite]

Strive not for frothy fame or bubble wealth:

A passing dream--

A Flashing flint--

A shadow's flight!

O what is knowledge, fine and superfine?

To innocent and simple joys resign!

When I go home, I'll carry on my back

A load of clouds--

A sweet-toned chin--

A pot of wine!

Humour in Irish Folk Literature

In the famous book , “  The  Humor of Ireland“ , edited by editor W.R Dirks, J A O’Donoghue writes  about Irish characters for humor , “That the Irish people have a wide reputation for wit and humour is a fact which will not be disputed. Irish humour is no recent growth, as may be seen by the folk-lore, the proverbs, and the other traditional matter of the country. It is one of Ireland's ancient characteristics, as some of its untranslated early literature would conclusively prove” The twentieth century literature as “ The Vision of McConglinne” is the proof that Irish are /were naturally joyous cheerful,  and they  produce good humorous folk poems too. There is in the book  Humour of Ireland “ , a translation of an Irish  manuscript of twelfth century which is good example of humor in folk literature of Ireland : 
 
to the danger awaiting a guest — ale ; 
 
to a broken head — butter roll ; 
 
to hand-upon-all — dry bread; 
 
to the pregnant thing of a hearth — cheese; 
 
to the bubble-burster — new ale ; 
 
to the priest's fancy — ^juicy kale; 
 
to the treasure that is smoothest and sweetest of all 
 
food — white porridge ; 
to the anchor — broth ; 
to the double-looped twins — sheep's tripe; 
to the dues of a wall — sides (of bacon) ; 
to the bird of a cross — salt; 
to the entry of a gathering — sweet apples ; 
to the pearls of a household — hen's eggs ; 
to the glance of nakedness — kernels. 
                              Humor in Norwegian Folk Literature  

Vell Espelan d explains various types of humor in Norwegian folk literature specially in Ballads of Norway . Vell narrates about Jocular ballads of Norway as , “These songs have enjoyed great popular recognition, but because the humour is often burlesque and crudely erotic, they were neglected by the cultivated people who transcribed the ballads during the 1800s. These were not songs suited to creating national pride, and several songs containing erotic humour were censored.”

Vell explains in detail about the creation style of many wity folk poems , “ Many of these songs make fun of gender roles, often by turning them upside down. A typical example is the song “Ungersven på tinget” (“The Young Man at the Moot”) which tells of a strong and aggressive woman who rapes a man. In the morning he goes to court and tries to have her arrested, but is merely ridiculed. Another large group of Jocular ballads deals with animals. In “Kråkevisa” (“The Tremendous Crow”) the humour lies in the description of an impossibly huge crow. Other popular songs such as “Tordivelen og flua” (“The Beetle marries the Fly”) deal with animals who act like humans. The animal songs have a naïve humour that children still find appealing. “

Vell further provides the familiarity of humorous folk songs ,”When we sing ballads in our day we are almost always motivated by the age of the song, but “The Tremendous Crow” and “The Miller's Daughter” (“Møllardottera”) are still sung simply because they are funny. “The Tremendous Crow” is quite probably the most popular folk song in the entire Norwegian repertoire.”

Humour in Italian Folk Literature

The book Medieval Italy :A Encyclopaedia edited by Christopher Cleinhenz provide many details of humour and wit in Italian folklores, folk songs and lyrical folk drama and poetic folktales . between 300 and 1400, folklores, folktales, folk literature played a great role in Italian society. Therefore, the essence of humour is there in every genre of folk literature The genre of folk literature contains many ridiculous characters, stupid characters and witty circumstances in the Italian lyrical folktales and non lyrical folktales. As found in many society, the love governs the genre of folk songs in Italy too. However, humorous folk songs have been created in Italian society in every age.

Humour in folk literature of German language

There are hundreds of folk songs in German language across Europe .

Humour in Slovene Folk Literature

Marko Terseglav in his book Ljudsko pesnistvo (1987), provided examples of a few folk songs of European languages such as English, French, German and Russian wherein there is humour or wit , Ben Amos, Bausinger, Herder, Bowra, Isacenko, Jackobson, Putilov also provided the details of humour in Slovene or Servo-Croatian regions .

Turkish Humour

The humour is found in Turkish folk literature – anecdotes , proverbs, legends, stories, tales, , , lullabies, folksongs, riddles, folk music forms, wailing etc.

Humour in Greek Folk Literature

Roderick Beaton offers examples of humour in folk literature of Greek language in his widely read book The Oral tradition of Modern Greece.

Humour in African Folklores

Harold Courlander (The Treasury of African Folklores), Roger D Abrahar (African Folktales) , Leo Frobenious (African Genesis ) , Richard Mercer ( African Folklores), Patricia Ann Lynch (African Mythology A to Z ) , provided humorous folklores of various regions and eras.

Wit and Humour in Bulgaria

Bulgarian folk literature is rich in terms of varied subjects and styles. There famous folk comic characters as Hitur Petur , Nastraddin Hodja around whom various folk poems, jokes, sayings are woven in Bulgarian oral literature. Wit and humour exhale from the folklores of various of Bulgarian tribes , Thrako-iliri, proto-Bulgarians and Slavs .

Humour in Folk literature of Tennessee

It is said, “Often there is a broad vein of humor in the folk expressions of the people. "I'm so hungry I could eat a bull - and it bellering!" "He's as lazy as the hound that leaned against the fence to bark." "She's as ugly as a mud fence dabbed over with toad frogs”

Humour in Garhwali Folk Songs/poems

In Garhwali folk songs humour is created through describing an unusual animal characters as Moto Dhanga (a Bull) , Musi mouse, goat, sheep etc ; by showing comparisons of age or richness; ridicules, uncouth behaviours of narrators or characters of poem, unusual words,

The emotions – laughter, remorse, apprehension, envy, fatigue, indolence, agility, slumber, dream, awakening and dissimilation are clearly visible in different forms in humorous folk poems of Garhwali language .

In many poems , laughter is worked by showing ridiculous works of others, by exaggerating situations, and remorse by slackness of villain characters . Same way negative emotions to create smile or humour are shown by insult of villains .

Moti Dhangu Folk Song a Humorous Song
Moti Dhangu a Garhwali Folk Song is familiar folk song. the song deals a Bull who is very slow in ploughing but very much anxious eating green grass
There is comparision too as the price of bull is nine rupees and cost of horns are hundred bucks. Humour is created by showing wrong size and unusual behaviour
1- घोटे जाली हींग , घोटे जालि हींग
नौ रूप्या को मोती ढाण्गो सौ रूप्या को सींग , सबसे म्यारो मोती ढाण्गो
गुठ्यारो को दांद गुठ्यारो क दांद
हळस्यूं देखिक ल्म्स्त ह्वेई जांद ससे म्यारो मोती ढागो
गुठ्यारो क दांद गुठ्यारो क दांद हुरु घास देखि च्चम खड़ो ह्वेई जांद सबसे मीरो मोती ढाण्गो
कलोड्यों देखि बुड्या क्न घुरयोंद आंखी
Ghughtin Biyan : Humour by unusual behaviour and exaggeration
Ghughtn Biyan is fine example of creating humour in any language literature . .Here the Gughti a bird is equalled to a caw and then situation is founded as the caw becomes pregnant and the caw delivers child and then she offers milk . here in this poem, the bird is pictured as caw and by that humor is created
२- घुघती न बियाण ल़ा घुग्ती मोल
घुग्ती न बियाण तै चैत का मैना
घुग्ती बिये ज्ञ कारो बालण कु पूजा
क्न घुग्ती तौंकी छई माणा दूध
घुग्ती की छांछ छोल़े छोलण सेर घीउ
The Garhwali Poetic Fold drama
The poetic drama is of rapture of humour and there is full of opportunity to create laughter, However, there is definitely a hidden tragedy which is capable of creating sharp satire too
मैं नि आन्दु त्वेकू , संगरामु बुड्या रम छम I
तेरी फूलीं च दाड़ी, संगरामु बुड्या रम छम I
तू बुड्या ह्व़े गे , संगरामु बुड्या रम छम I
मैं नि आन्दु त्वेकू , संगरामु बुड्या रम छम I
तेरी डूडी कमरी , संगरामु बुड्या रम छम I
तू खंकारा को भोगी , संगरामु बुड्या रम छम I
तू आँख को काणो , संगरामु बुड्या रम छम I
मैं नि आन्दु त्वेकू , संगरामु बुड्या रम छम I
तेरी फूलीं च दाड़ी, संगरामु बुड्या रम छम I
तेरी फूलीं च दाड़ी, संगरामु बुड्या रम छम I
A white bearded old aged person shows his keen desire to marry a beautiful girl in her teen and the girl replies in songs which is melodious and there is tremendous scope for delightful drama in the song
The girl says that she will not marry the old man who has white beard a bent back, , who ha asthma, who is half blind as his one ey is no where on the head. She bluntly refuse to marry with old man
The stage may be on a courtyard, filed, Bisaun (resting place) or in forest or anywhere. It is not necessary that the performers are male and female. In our student life, the child performer used to wear the beard of Syolu (a fiber of Bheemal/Bhyunl) or Fiber of Bhang (hemp)
The act is very laud and female performer may show arrogance of her beauty, tenderness and teen age; scorning or slandering old aged person, . The old performer may perform by showing old age and can bring pathos too by begging her as wife, and this pathos will be converted into ridicules by uncouth behaviour or strange body movements by old person performer which will bring smile, laughter and excessive laughter.
The folk drama clearly shows the sensitivity, social awareness , of folk song creator who are bent to provide realistic picture with a clear message of social reform
Dr Shiva Nand a learned expert of Garhwali folk Literature position this song in Hansodi Folk Song-Dance" or Humorous Folk Song-Dance
(Ref: Dr Shiva Nand Nautiyal, Shyam Chham Ghungaru Bajla, page 50 for folk song

रणुरौत : एक धार्मिक लोक जागर (गीत

Demons , Ghost, Spirits in Religions, Mythology

RanRaut Ranbhoot Jagar : Demonolatry Rituals /Rites of Garhwal, Asia
रणुरौत : एक धार्मिक लोक जागर (गीत

(Garhwali Folk Literature, Himalayan Folk Literature, Asian Folk Literature)

Bhishma Kukreti

As soon as human civilization started the Demonolatry also started. Demonolatry means worshiping of demons, ghost, fairies, dead ones, unsatisfied souls, evils spirits, devils etc

The following list od DEMONS is just to show the glimpse of demons familiar with a couple of religions, sects, civilizations or regions.

Assyrian Mythology Demons

Adramelech,

Akkadian Mythology Demons

Allu,Uttuku, Succubus, Pazuzu, Lilith, Gallu ,

Balinese Mythological Demons
Rangada

Babylonian Mythological Demons

Teeraal,

Bulgarian Demons

Lamia,

Christian Demons

Zaebos, Zagan,Zepat, Yeterel, Xapahan , Valefar ,Vapula ,VassagoVepar ,Verrine ,Vine ,Volac , Vual, Ukobach, Titubillus, Tartaruchi , Temeluchus,Suragat , Sitiri, Sidragasam, Shax, Satanachia, Scox, Seere, Sabnock, Sallos, Ronov , Rosier, Raum, Person, Procel, Phenex, Pithius, Paimon, Obizoth, Oraay, Oriax, Orbas, Ose, Naberius, Naberus, Naphula, Nisroch, malphas, Mammon, Marax, Marbas, Marchosias, Mathim, Maphistopheles, Marihem, Moloch, Murmur , Label, Legion, Leraje, Leviathan, Lucifer, Lix tetrax, Lucifuge Rofocale, haagenti, Halphas, Imp, Ipos, familiars, Focalor, Foras, Furcas, Furfur, Gremory, Gusion, Dantalion, Decarabia, Devil, Bal, Balam, Barbas, Barbatos, Bathin, Beleth, Belphegor, berith, Bifrons, Botis, Buer, Bune, Caccacrinolaas, Caim, Cimereje, Crocell, Crone, amon, Abdaddon, Abalam, Agares, Allocer, Amymon, Amdusias, Amon, Amy, Andras, Andrealphus, Antichrist, Apployan, Armoras, Astaroth,

Demons of Egypt

Ammit, Apep, Shezmu

Japanese Demons

Yuki-Onna, Yokai, Tengu, Raiju, Oni, Kitsune,jikininki,

Jewish Demons

Abyzou, Agaliarept, Ageil, Asbe’l, Azazel, Beelzabe, Behmoth, Belial, Danjal, Gadre’l, Grigori, Kokbe’al, Lili, Lix Tatrax, Mastema, Penemue, Rumjal, Shedim, Tannin, Yeqon, Ziz

Garhwali (Himalayan, India) DemonsDe

Anchheri, Ranbhoot, Family Hantya, Bhoot, Pichas, Sayed, Maimanda, Kaintura, Ranraut, Tilu Rauteli, Surji Kaunl, Bhanu Bhopal,

Greek Demons

Empusa, Eurvale, Eurynom, Euronomos, Gorgon, Medusa,

Islamic mythological Demons

Iblis, Ifrit, Masiah ad Dajjal, Shaitan, Zalambur

Mapuche Mythological Demons

Wekufe,

Mayan Demons

Aztecs, Toltecs, Zapotecs,, Ab Uok Puc, Chac, Ekahau, Hapikern, Kisin,Paqok, Xiba

Demons of Africa

Zin, Dakaki, Kum, Ba-Mugaje, Mai-Ggangaadi, Bidda, Taiki, Rako, Kworrom, Sankin, Jigo, Bo Toye, Maken, Kishi, Bori , Mbiri, Qandisa,

Zoroastrian Demons

Daeva, Bushbasta, Azi Dahaka, Aeshma,
Ranraut a RanBhoot Folk Song of Garhwal
रणरौत : एक धार्मिक लोक जागर (गीत)
In Garhwal , people worship Ghosts, Bhoot by several ways and means . One way is to worship Brave family legends or community legends by arranging Mandan . In Mandan the Das play drums and sing the Jagar of particular Brave Soul or legends and Pashwas or people dance according to rhythm and song contents

RanRaut is very famous Legendary Song of Rawat Community . As poem, the poem contains all raptures except Adhorence in ful sense . The readers will enjoy the figures of speeches, proverbs, and many old -new phrases

सिरीनगर रंद छयो राजा प्रीतामसाही

कुलावली कोट मा रंद रौतु औलाद

हिंवां रौत को छयो भिंवा रौत

भिंवा रौत को छयो रणु रौत

रणु रौत होलू मालू मा को माल

जैको डबराळया माथो छ , खंखराल्य़ा जोंखा

घूंडों पौंछदी भुजा छन जोधा की

मुन्गर्याळी फीलि छन मेरा मरदो

माल मा दूण रांजड़ा ऐन

तौन कांगली सिरीनगर भेज्याली

रूखा रुखा बोल लेख्या तीखा लेख्या स्वाल

बोला बोला मेरा कछडि का ज्वानू

मेरा राज पर कैन त यो धावा बोले

मेरा गढवाल मा कु इनु माल होलू

जु भैर का मालू तै जीतिक लालू

तबरेक उठीक बोलदू छीलू भिम्ल्या

यी तरैं को माल होलू कुलवाली कोट

हिंवां रौत न तलवार मारे

रणु रौत मी तलवार मारलो

रणु रौत होलू तलवार्या जवान

जैका मारख्वल्य़ा छन बेला

जैका चौसिंग्या खाडू होला, खोळया होला कुत्ता

कुलवाली कोट को वो रणुरौत

मेरो भाणजा मालू साधिक लालो

प्रीतम साही मराज तब कांगली लेखद

हे बुबा रणु रौत तू होल्यु बांको भड़

भात खाई तख हात धोई यख
जामो पैरी तख तणि बाँधी यख
कागली पौंचीगे रौत का पास
तब बांचद कांगली रौत
शेर जसा मोछ छ्या रौत का
तैका मणि का मान धड़कन लै गेन
तैकू हात की मुसळी बबल़ाण लै गेन
कंड़ीळ बंश का कांडो जजराँद
निरकुलो पाणि डाली सि हिरांद
तब धाई लगान्द रणु राणी भिमला
मै त जान्दो राणी सैणि माल दूण
मेरा वास्ता पकौ निरपाणि खीर
राणी भिमला तब कुमजुल्या ह्व़े गे
नई नई मया छे ऊंकी जवानी की ,
नयो नयो ब्यो छो
राणी भीमला ड़ाळी सि अळस्येगे
छोड़दी पयणा नेतर रांग सा बुंद
मै जोडिक स्वामी तुम जुद्ध को पैटयां
सुमरदो तब रौत देवी झाली माली
ढेबरा लुक्दा बखरा लुक्दा
मर्द कबि नि रुकदा शेर कबि नि डरदा
लुवा जंगी जामा पैरण लैग्या
सैणा सिरीनगर ऐ गे रणु
जैदेऊ माल्यान गरदनी मालिक
हे रौर आज जैदेऊ त्वेक च बुबा
तू छे मेरा रणु मालू मा को माल
त्वेन मारणान ल्वे चटा माल
राजा क आज्ञा लेक रौत चलीगे
माल को दूण कुई माल बोदा
ये t ऐ चखुनी चूंडला आंगुळी मारला
तब छेत्रो को हंकार चढ़े रौत
मारे तैंन मछुली सी उफाट
छोड़े उडाल तलवार
तैंन मुंडू का चौंरा लगै न
तैंन खूनन घट रिंगेन मरदो
तै माई मरदु का चेलान मरदो
सि केल़ा सि कचेन गिदुडु सि फाडिन
बैरी को नौ रखे ऋणना
For Part II , Please refer Dr Govind Chatak , Gahdwal Ki Lok Kathayen pg 209
Or Dr Shivanand Nautiyal, garhwal ke Loknrity Geet , pg 171
Copyright @ Bhishma Kukreti, bckukreti@gmail.com

Budhapa by Dandriyal : Marvelous Description of Old Age in a Garhwali Poem

Old Age in Poems

Budhapa by Dandriyal : Marvelous Description of Old Age in a Garhwali Poem

(Garhwali Literature, Himalayan Literature, Asian Literature)

Bhishma Kukreti

There is no human being in this earth who never talks or who never thinks about Old Age . There is no art, science or philosophy which, did not discuss about Old Age .

Biologists as Morris Rockstein (Ph.D) sates in his article The Biological Aspects of Aging (The Gerontologists , 1968) that aging implies certain quantitative , rather than qualitative changes but not completely so . Morris further discusses that the aging brings changes which bring decrease in the skin, muscles, nervous system, skeleton, senses, etc

Psychologists watch old age from various views and styles. Psychologist confirm that during old age the person feels either accomplishment or failure and experience conflict between despair vs integrity .

From cultural angle . each culture interpret old age differently and even individual interprets old age differently too.

Various societies emphasize on aging differently in terms of social positioning to old aged people, quality of life, health, social exclusion , providing social security either by social norms or constitutional norms etc

Each country has different regulation for taking care of old aged persons.

Artists of different subjects or art perceive old age differently . Old age phenomenon is so sensitive and inspiring that artists as Leonardo de Vinci , Lorenzo De Medici, Michelangelo thousand of sculptures all over world of all eras created art about showing old age

In every philosophy and religion, there serious discussion about old age .

In every language, there are quotes and sayings about old . Oscar wild says , “ The tragedy of old age is not that one is old, but that one is young” .

In literature, in every language and in each field of literature old age has been favorite subject for literature creators specially the poets of all languages discussed old age with their perception.

Robert Browning’s small poem about old age is very positive and he paid importance to hope.

"Grow old along with me!

The best is yet to be,

The last of life, for which the first was made"

Mathew Arnorl depicts old age as morose portraits and poetically speaking brings detachment emotion of pathos rapture

" It is to spend long days
And not once feel that we were ever young.
It is to add, immured
In the hot prison of the present, month
To month with weary pain. "

Lord Byron details old age as mirror of the past in his verse as

"What is the worst of woes that wait on age?

What stamps the wrinkle deeper on the brow?

To view each loved one blotted from life's page,

And be alone on earth, as I am now."

The poem of Edwin Leibfreed explains old age as winter of the life

"When life's summer grows to winter

And its roses fade and fall;

When in vain we try to hinder

Death's commissioned right to all;

When on white lips there's a last kiss

And we see her face no more,

Then it is to know what love is,

Waiting on a foreign shore."

"Hennery Wordsworth Longfellow explains old age as

Time has laid his hand

Upon my heart, gently, not smiting it,

But as a Harper lays his open palm

Upon his harp, to deaden its vibrations"

The poets and philosopher W B Yeats illustrates old age as regret

"When you are old and gray and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep; "

An Iraqi Poet Buland Al-Haidary wrote a very interesting poem on Old age

“Another winter,
And here am I,
By the side of the stove,
that a woman might dream of me,
That I might bury in her breast
A secret she would not mock;
Dreaming that in my fading years
I might spring forth as light,
And she would say:
This light is mine;
Let no woman draw near it.”
“-Here,
By the side of the stove,
Another winter,
And here Am I,
Spinning my dreams and fearing them,
Afraid her eyes would mock
My bald, idiotic head,
My greying, aged soul,
Afraid her feet would kick
My love,
And here, by the side of the stove,
I would be lightly mocked by a woman.-“
“-Alone,
Without love, or dreams, or a woman,
And tomorrow I shall die of the cold within,
Here, by the side of the stove.-“

The poems In View of fact "of A. R. Ammons, "Forgetfulness" of Billy Collins, " Age " by Robert Creeley,"Terminus" by Ralph Waldo Emerson,"An Old Man’s Winter Night" created by Robert Frost, "Affirmation" versed by Donald Hall,"I Look into My Glass" of poet Thomas Hardy," First gesture "by Julia Kasdorf,"Touch Me" by Stanley Kunitz, are the poems on old age with different temparament and different emotions

Lu Yu a Chinese poet of twelth century wrote an outsatnding poem on aging in carefree mood .Wang Wei a Chinese poet of seventh century did create poem on old age based on Buddhist philosophy

"Nature" crafted by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow,"Late Ripeness" of Czeslaw Milosz,"Hail and Farewell" versed by Charles Reznikoff,"Tired with All These, For Restful Death I Cry" written by William Shakespeare are reamrkable pieces of verses about old age

Hungarian poet Gyula Illyes wrote apoem on old age which is slightly similar to yeats.

The poems as ---" A su Retrato” a Spanish poem by Sor Juana Ines de la Cruz,Like as the Waves Make Toward the Pebbled Shore" by William Shakespeare,"Young men dancing, and the old" versed by Thomas Stanley, "Tithonus" written by Lord Alfred Tennyson, " Do Not Go Into That Good Night created by Dylan Thomas take the readers to think seriously about the aim of life

In japan , many Zen oriented poems on old age are written by various poets at various era

"The Descent" by William Carlos Williams, " After Retirement , After Reading Lear" written by David Wright, "Sailing to Byzantium" by William Butler Yeats, "Written In a Carefree Mood" created by Lu Yu, "Warning" versed by Jenny Joseph and many more are marvelous examples of poems about ‘Old Age’ . No doubt every poet perceived old age differently .

The follwing poem of a Japanese poetMuso Soseki is fine example of Buddhist philosophy on old age

"Old Man in Retirement" (A Japanese Poem)

By Muso Soseki

I stop worrying about anything
I give up activities
I'm full of my life

I no longer
go to the temple
evening and morning
If they ask me
“What are you doing
in your old age?”

I smile and tell them
“I'm letting my white hair
fall free.”.."

The famous Arabic poet Ibn Daher describes Old Age as

You can not prevent Allah's Will to make us Old

bBut perhaps he will reward us for enduring Old Age

The Noble Lauret a Polish poet CzeslawMilosz also wrote fine poetry on old age

Swami Chinmay transformed the sayings of Lord Buddha about old age into a poem as :

The glorious chariots of the kings wear out;
the body also comes to old age;
but the virtue of good people never ages;
thus the good teach each other

Great Poet (Mahakavi) Kanhaiyalal Dandriyal depicts old age philosophically, spiritually rather than just the transformation of physical body. As person Kanhaiyalal Dandriyal was very religious person too and his religious spirituality shines in his each verse. The functionality of the poem is towards various directions as conflict, reflecting contrast and ironies of life. The poem definitely is preaches too directly or indirectly. The poem opens many truthful facets of life and many times the poem creates detachment too. Kanhaiyalal Dandriyal depicts various ups and downs in life to carry a human life. The great poet shows the mirror to all whether the person is teen aged, young, mature or an old person that the end is death. Dandriyal differentiates between the acts through code of conducts and acts due to greed or ego with perfect narration using least quantity of words. For describing old age, the great poet took instances and characters of Mahabharata, Ramayan, Puran and classic poems of Sanskrit for narrating modern aspects of social security, the frustration of not achieving, the living aspirations, a animal instinct to protect the genes, and inability of all human beings to stop aging and death too .

Kanhaiyalal Dandriyal used various figures of speeches to make understand the serious subject. His words, symbols, phrases make a clear image of subject as per perception of the poet .

The Great Poet Dandriyal successfully could create the emotions as grief, awe, detachment, remorse, depression, anxiety, delusion, illusion, agitation, stupor, dejection, eagerness, epilepsy, insanity, death, deliberation, stunning, tears in the poem ‘Budhapa” (old Age)

The style in Budhapa poem is free and near to prose type poetry

The great poet is always master of using simple and understandable words, phrases, examples, symbols to make serious subject very easy for all

बुढापा
मिल जनम ल्हें
ये संसार क अंत मा
अर सब्बुं चै पैलि
यान मि
सब्ज्यठ्यु बि छौं
अर निकाणसो
झणि कब बटे
येई ढुंगम बैठ्युं छौं
यई ढुंग मुड़ी
एक संहिता च
एक नक्शा च
सैन्वार , उकाळ अर
उंदार को तिराहा च
यखम बटे सब कुछ देखी सकदा तुम
वो द्याखो ..
जैकी सिर्गितिम छिन
उफरदी कूम्प
हैंसदा फूल
नाचदा नौन्याल
य सैन्वार च
अर द्यखणा छ्याँ
यीं तड़तड़ी उकाळ तैं
उचयीं गौळी
अधिती तीस तैं
बस्ता बोकी जांद नौन्याळ तैं
एक हांक तैं पिछान्दा तरुणु तैं
गृहष्टि क ....
बोझ मुड़ी रड़दा अद्कुडू तैं
यो यीं तरफ जख
लम्डदा ढांगा गौड़ी भैंसी
कथगै अभाग मनिख
रड़दा डांग झड़दा पत्ता
फ्ल्दी मारदा छिन्छाड़ा
भ्यटेंदि बौंळी
अर झणि कख जाणे कैबे मा
अटगदा बटवै दिखेंदन
या च उंदार
जु पट रौल पौन्छंद
एक हैंकु
बाटु बि च
अमर पथ
जैक दुछव डि
सत्कर्म का
डाळ छन
पर उपकार से
जनम्यां फल छिन
पुरुषार्थ का
पसीना से धुईं ढुंगी छिन
परिश्रम्युं की
पैतुल्युं से पवित्र हुईं धूळ च
ये रस्ता फर हिटदिन
भाग्य तै संवरदा कर्मबीर
सर्वस्व त्याग करदा सिद्ध
जु म्वरद स्यू होंद अमर
यई त च अकल़ाकंट
किलैकि मि
म्वरण णि चांदु
द्यखण चांदु ....
अपण ह्तुन रळयाँ बीजूं तैं
अन्गर्दा उफ़रदा फुल्दा फलदा
बचपन नचदै कुदद मरद
जवानी ह्न्सदै ख्यल्द
पर मि ..
उगससी भरि भरी बि
बचण चांदु
अजी तैं
बच्युं छौं
कथगा दों
मिन ययाति बणि
नौनो मैं ज्वनी मांग
च्यवन बणि
यौवन खुणि तरसणु रों
दवाई खाणु रों
कैकयी की खातिर
राम तै बणवास दे
राम तैं रावणन
कै दिने घुल्याल
पर मि अबी तैं
बाटु निहळणु छौं
चिट्ठी बि ऐ रामै
चिट्ठी रसां तैं
पुच्छणु छौं
मि स्वार्थ मा अन्धो
धितरास्ट्र छौं
जैक लडिकुकि
हरेक महाभारत मा
कटघळ लगणि रै
फजला ब्यखुन तार आणे रैं
संजय नौ नौ ल्हेक बथाणु रै
मि टक्क लगैक सुणणु रों
हुन्गरा देणु रों
युधिष्ठर क दियां
पेंसनपट्टा क सार फर
मेरी लाटी आशा गांधारी
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